![]() The natural speech of English is essentially iambic, and you need to be sure that you have built sentences that are reasonably natural and that tell your story like a conversation, with all the grammar and sentence structure intact, not "is kicking can"! What lips my lips have kissed, and where, and why, I have forgotten, and what arms have lain Under my head till morning but the rain Is full of ghosts tonight, that tap and sigh Upon the glass and listen for reply, And in my heart there stirs a quiet pain For unremembered lads that not again Will turn to me at midnight with a cry. ![]() Childream how do I improve it?With some very minor glitches you have succeeded in maintaining the iambic pentameter-at the sacrifice of coherence or natural word flow.
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